tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post3964362078325242503..comments2023-10-25T01:27:14.982-07:00Comments on Thoughts in Poetry and Prose: Day 24 - Wordle WordsGloriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-5476887921737554322011-04-25T12:15:14.584-07:002011-04-25T12:15:14.584-07:00Brenda - Thank you for the words that tickled my m...Brenda - Thank you for the words that tickled my muse. I'm always fascinated by the amazing variety of responses to the same lists of words.<br /><br />whenwordsescape - Thanks so much!!! :)<br /><br />Elizabeth - Thank you, I really appeciate it.<br /><br />iself - Thank you, but I fear the continuation of the story would lead us down a path to tragedy!<br /><br />Jingle - Thank you so much, and I really do appreciate the award!! I will definitely pick it up and put it on my site with pride! :)<br /><br />Mr. Walker - I really appreciate your comments. Thank you so much!<br /><br />Pamela - Hi, and thanks so much!! :)Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-57694310640914336842011-04-25T09:45:15.952-07:002011-04-25T09:45:15.952-07:00Gloria, this is a wonderful piece of writing from ...Gloria, this is a wonderful piece of writing from the first line to the last. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-92119356268458844132011-04-25T09:39:47.323-07:002011-04-25T09:39:47.323-07:00Gloria, I had to read it twice, it was so dense wi...Gloria, I had to read it twice, it was so dense with meaning. I like your take on the words and that conflict between forgetting and remembering and pain and what to do with it - revenge. A powerful write.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-28787443453890179082011-04-25T08:30:31.535-07:002011-04-25T08:30:31.535-07:00Hello:
You have won The Perfect Poet Award Week 4...Hello:<br /><br /><a href="http://promisingpoetscafe.wordpress.com/2011/04/25/the-thursday-poets-rally-week-42-perfect-poet-award/" rel="nofollow">You have won The Perfect Poet Award Week 42, Due to your performance in the present or previous Poets Rally!</a><br /><br />Please leave a link under the award post after you take it,<br /><br />This award will Not be given to poets who reject it or previously rejected it.<br /><br />Happy Writing, Thanks for the support!<br /><br />join poets rally week 42 today.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-61780614642408595102011-04-25T08:29:53.507-07:002011-04-25T08:29:53.507-07:00u r a true word smith.
masterful job...u r a true word smith.<br />masterful job...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-36918161953216699932011-04-24T22:06:04.339-07:002011-04-24T22:06:04.339-07:00Well done, Gloria! Makes we want to read the conti...Well done, Gloria! Makes we want to read the continuation of the story :)Iselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08601870100584844946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-54086269486543976152011-04-24T21:43:40.788-07:002011-04-24T21:43:40.788-07:00I agree, your use of words is smooth and almost ca...I agree, your use of words is smooth and almost casual, yet the image of struggle is strong and apparent in the poem. I love to watch how many different places the words can be taken. <br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-69326522264173166612011-04-24T19:26:08.329-07:002011-04-24T19:26:08.329-07:00I agree with Brenda...those first four lines...jus...I agree with Brenda...those first four lines...just pulled me in to keep reading! The use of the wordle words flowed quite nicely! Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7797516698904650063.post-79367377818912042002011-04-24T18:11:27.395-07:002011-04-24T18:11:27.395-07:00Gloria! This is a pointed piece. It called for a...Gloria! This is a pointed piece. It called for a second and then third read. I love the opening four lines... the rest of it follows and takes the reader deeper. Well done! <br /><br />I'll add your blog to the prompt site. :) I'm excited to see the poems come whirling in! It's interesting that you and I both used the pinwheels in tattoos.<br /><br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com