a tanka? I think sovery nice imagery here!! the almost progression from the morning illusion into the dawn - circular between the sleep and wakefulness that disrupts the cycle! nice!
It's not an illusion that this is a lovely poem.
I know it well. Nicely done.
Absolutely lovely. I like your take! Here's mine: http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/02/01/no-illusion/
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