Beautiful Vieques PR

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Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Words

Day 19 April P-A-D - Just a couple of Cinquains

Words
Like pearls
Strung together into
Beguiling choker of dignity
Mockery

 
Pearls
Words strung
Together wrap around
Mind’s heart with passion
Gemstones

5 comments:

  1. I love how one led to the other, but both have singular messages. The pieces are clever and well constructed. Nicely done!
    ~Brenda

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  2. Gloria, I love how you set these against each other. Two different messages, that read nicely.

    Pamela

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  3. Ah..! But then there's always... interpretation...

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  4. Gloria, this is not only true, but eloquently stated. The whole allusion to jewels is perfect. Thank you! Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/20/laptopia-ode-to-starbucks-haiku/

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