Beautiful Vieques PR

Beautiful Vieques PR

Sunday, January 30, 2011

Illusion




















Done for Prompt #5 at Writer's Island

Morning illusion

Between sleep and wakefulness

Unreal melody

Song of the night now departs

Leaving dawn of confusion

5 comments:

  1. a tanka? I think so

    very nice imagery here!! the almost progression from the morning illusion into the dawn - circular between the sleep and wakefulness that disrupts the cycle! nice!

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  2. It's not an illusion that this is a lovely poem.

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  3. Absolutely lovely. I like your take! Here's mine: http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/02/01/no-illusion/

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  4. Thanks everybody....I appreciate your comments!

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