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Saturday, April 30, 2011

A Good Day

Day 30 and final day of April Poem-A-Day Challenge!  Today's prompt at Poetic Asides is, "When I leave here...."   This 30th day of doing a poem a day found my brain a bit fatigued, but I had to finish what I started, right?  So here's my final (though feeble) response.

When I leave here,
I will be there,
In the car and
Out of my chair.

When I arrive
In another part of town,
I'll head to son's deck
And sit right back down

With fresh air and sunshine,
Maybe too much to eat,
But all in all,
A much better seat!

With the warmth of
Family, friends, and sun
I know this afternoon
Will be fun!


  1. Have been spending time with sister who is recovering slowly. She has a patio and backyard that is so enticing. Have spent time out there with my camera and just sitting soaking up the color, feel, and air of that space. All of that is to say, I know exactly what you are saying,


  2. It does sound like a perfect afternoon, Gloria! What a joy it has been to get to know your work. You are a wonderful writer!

  3. I hope your afternoon went well, Gloria. Nothing like sunshine and family!

  4. You've goy all the ingredients for a perfect day.

  5. I like the positivity and optimism of this leaving. It brought up good associations in my mind too. Thanks.


  6. I have enjoyed my time visiting you, Gloria. Let's continue ... I love the sunshine:)